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Dear World,
I'm tired,
very tired,
of those names you call me,
how you put me down,
and the pain you give.
It's not fair?
Why focus on me?
I guess it's better this way,
you hurt me, rather than the people I care about.
But, I suppose it doesn't bother you one bit.
I hurts that I'm broken, scarred, and useless.
But I'm tired now.
I have said what I needed to.
I have shed my last tear.
I will soon take my last breath.
You made me who I am, World.
I hope you're happy.
I'm just in one of those moods.
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Buttercream13 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't be sad!! If no one will love you than I will!! No deviant left behindHuggle! hugs, kudos, love!!
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww! Thanks! :huggle:
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013   Writer
The poem is quite good, but it is not the World's fault, it is the humans fault for giving birth to such walls, ideologies and idiotic concepts that people start to become less interested and more ignorant with the World. The World lives so that we can live, just think about it, if the World would be the one to blame, what do you think might truly happen with humanity?

As a little friendly advice, maybe you know or maybe not, but words hold power, use them wisely :)
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When I wrote the World, I meant the people in it. I apologize for not making it clear. I will remember that in the future. Thank you for the great advise. :)
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013   Writer
Ok, I understand it as well. Although your poem is very good :)
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013   Writer
Welcome :pray:
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Zytn Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
I know exactly how you feel. I go through this daily. I just hope it stops for you. I hope everyone will just stop all the hate, and bring about the love and peace we all so dearly need.
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the kind words.
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Zytn Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
No problem. I know what its like.
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