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Flames dance on a wooden stage
So bright, so energetic
Sparks drift upward
Making the smoke glow
I place the tip of my stick
in the ember fernice
It ignites instantly
I pull it near my face
so I could watch the flame
Then I shove it into the ashes
And watch the smoke spiral upward
I love bonfires.
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I was at a bonfire, and could help but thinking how pretty the flames were.
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Where was the bonfire?
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~messie2624 Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know. I went with the Cub Scouts and they tell their siblings anything.
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So, what did they tell you?
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~messie2624 Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Your going on a hayride."
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So if they wouldn't have told you, it would have been a surprise thing after the bonfire?
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~messie2624 Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*shrugs* I don't know.
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That is a real sweet picture you paint....thankful for vicariously living through stuff like this poem cuz I haven't experienced that real life in a while. Thanks.
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~messie2624 Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome! That means so much to me! :love:
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